Friday, December 10, 2010

A fair attempt..!

Aval...



Oru andhi neram..
aval avanodu kai pidithu
oru kuzhandhai pola..!
mella mella adivaithu pogindraal..
Kaarmegam avalai
inum azhagu padutha
thamarai ilai mel ottatha neer pola
aval mel mazhai thuligal..!

Avan ora kangalal avalai paarka
thidirena kuzhambugiraan..?
achiryathil oru azhagu siripu...!!
Oru devadhai vaanilirundhu vandhuvitaaloo
yendra achiryam!
Yethanai azhagu antha thamarai pol!!

Karmegam pilandhadhu mazhaiyaga!
aval magizhchiyil aada
avan avalaye paka
kadhal perugugirathu!!
aanalum avanuku poramai
avalai thotadum
Mazhai thuligal mel!!

Adhattum Thozhiyaga..
sandai idum kadhaliyaga..
Anbu Manaiviyaga..
Kurumbu thanamana kuzhandhaiyaga..
pasamana Thaiyagaa..
yelam avale..!!

Mazhai nindrum iruvarukullum
kadhal nindrathilai..
Vanathirku yellai unda?
Yarenum kandullargala?
Apadi yendral..
kadhalum vanathai pola than..!!
aanal...
avargal kadhal antha vanathai vida
periyathu..!!

udal veru yendralum
uyir ondru than..!
Avargaluku..!!

Guys..I have attempted to write a Tamil poem (Kavidhai) after a very long time.. I used to write during my school days..Now I have come back after years..!! If there are any corrections, please forgive me...!! Do post ur suggestions and comments...!! :)




4 comments:

  1. Great job madhu!!! sorry for visiting so late... Very inspiring!!! even i want to write like you. :)

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  2. He he..:) Thanks de..Is it really good? No probs for commenting late de..I am inspired by ur comment..:)

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